The dark grey storm clouds weep large, ice
cold rain drops. The sun set long ago, and the full moon shines above Gotham City. An alarm goes off from the cold, desolate building that is Gotham Prison. The Joker sprints down an alleyway, his wide grin smiling even wider. He hides behind a dumpster, and the police whoosh past, their sirens on in the cold November air. The joker goes over his plan in his mind. He has the ultimate mission. It is the one crime all criminals wish to accomplish. He’s going to travel to England, and dive through the Thames. He’s going to climb up a slimey, smelly, revolting plumbing tube that’s hundreds of years old. The joker is on his way to Steal the crown jules.
cold rain drops. The sun set long ago, and the full moon shines above Gotham City. An alarm goes off from the cold, desolate building that is Gotham Prison. The Joker sprints down an alleyway, his wide grin smiling even wider. He hides behind a dumpster, and the police whoosh past, their sirens on in the cold November air. The joker goes over his plan in his mind. He has the ultimate mission. It is the one crime all criminals wish to accomplish. He’s going to travel to England, and dive through the Thames. He’s going to climb up a slimey, smelly, revolting plumbing tube that’s hundreds of years old. The joker is on his way to Steal the crown jules.
The police send the bat Signal to get batman to go to gordon the leader of the police
Gordon tells Batman that the joker is going to England to steal the crown jules. The joker is now at England. Batman is on his way to England. when Batman gets to England he hops in to the batmobile and starts it up Batman drives the batmobile to the joker. The joker breaks into the joly store lexloofor and the riddler find the joker in the july store the joker breaks the glass the joker and lexloofor get the jules. Batman sneks to the door. Batman gets the joker.
the police take the joker and the riddler to Gotham City prison.
What an incredibly descriptive story Mackley, I'm really impressed. When I read, I can see pictures in my mind, like a movie playing from scene to scene. You inspire me to want to write too!
ReplyDeleteHi Mackley It's Oliver form Awahono school. Your store is amazing. next time could you check it before you blog it because it doesn't make sense to me. I like Batman too.
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DeleteHi Mackley,
ReplyDeleteIt has been lovely to see you working on a piece of writing in your own time. This piece of writing has shown me that you enjoy writing narrative pieces and when given the chance you will write for enjoyment.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Regards,
Mrs B
it is cool but it is to big next time you could make it smaller
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